Below is a list of services, but I can tailor a package to suit every writer and every project. All services are for screenplay and teleplay. If you are looking for other services or not sure which service would be right for you, please contact me at susansojourna@gmail.com and I’ll walk you through it.

 

If you know which service(s) you’d like, simply click on it below and proceed to checkout. After you check out and submit your payment, please submit your script by emailing it to me directly susansojourna@gmail.com. I will send you an email confirmation.

 

Please read my SPECIAL NOTE at the bottom of this page before making any purchases, and contact me before ordering any RUSH services to make sure they are available. PLEASE NOTE: All prices listed are for scripts 125 pages or less. For each page beyond 125, please add $3 per page using the additional.

Script Analysis

What’s included in this package:

  • Script Coverage/Analysis of the first 15 pages only

  • Script Report [2 pages] covering story concept, dialogue, character development, story structure, and execution. 

  • Grading Sheet covering the most important elements of your script including; Concept, Story, Characters, Dialogue, Tone, Structure, Commerciality, Originality, etc

This service is for writers:

  1. just getting started with a script, or

  2. having trouble making the story make sense,

  3. not sure how to build your plot or structure your story or

  4. develop your characters.

What’s included in this package:

  • Script Coverage/Analysis of the entire script [90-130pages]

  • Detailed Script Report [up to 4 pages] covering story concept, dialogue, character development, story structure, and execution — looking at the project’s overall potential and how best to improve it moving forward. 

  • Actionable Items – specific notes regarding solutions to story issues.

  • Line Notes throughout the script

  • Grading Sheet covering the most important elements of your script including; Concept, Story, Characters, Dialogue, Tone, Structure, Commerciality, Originality, etc

  • One phone consultations [60 minutes at delivery]

 

This service is for writers:

  1. who have completed their script but not sure if it’s marketable, or if the story is compelling, or plot point and or/characters are strong.

  2. who are suffering from ‘writer’s block’ and you’re not sure how to build your story, or

  3. who are still writing but you need help with character development, plot points, structure, or

  4. not getting the positive feedback from writing competition, agents, etc.

Premium Script Analysis

Script Doctor

*PLEASE email me first before ordering this service! Service includes an extensive polish on dialogue, action, transitions and descriptions to bring out your voice and make your pages shine and your script flow! Also includes a full editing of your script for typos, grammatical mistakes, correct screenplay formatting, and (if necessary) reformatting your script into Final Draft. Rewriting prices vary from $1200-$3000, so please email to inquire first. Turnaround time and prices vary depending on how extensive the polish is.

Professional Script Polishing/Editing/Reformatting

This service is for the serious writer who wants to re-write or develop the script within four weeks. First, you will submit your script [completed script or work in progress] and I will complete a Detailed Script Report [4 or more pages]. We will review the notes together via phone meeting and I will give you specific writing assignments to address the script issues or edit suggestions for the script.  A full set of development notes will be given to you at each session – addressing your new edits. We will meet 4 times via phone or Skype for 60-90 minutes per call.

 

This service is for you if:

  1. you’re a serious writer and willing to work every week, or

  2. you’re having a hard time solving the issues of your script, or

  3. you’re aware of the missing story elements [ie compelling characters, strong plot points, believable dialogue, etc] but do not know how to solve them.

 

What’s included in this package:

-four [4] one on one sessions via Skype or phone 60-90 minutes

-one [1] Detailed Script Report

-solution proposals regarding story structure, character development, plot and/or dialogue issues

-three [3] weekly development notes addressing your new edited

Writing Services

$282.98

$463.05

Writing Coach – 4 writing sessions

$695.00

$1,235.00

Special note:

I would STRONGLY recommend you register your script before submitting it anywhere, including any script consulting company. This will protect both you the writer, and me the analyst. No producer or script consultant is ever out to steal anyone’s ideas (at least I would hope not), but it’s always best to protect yourself. It is pretty cheap to register your script and it will be well worth it to all parties. You can do so by going to the following websites: www.wga.org OR www.wgaeast.org for those on the East Coast. You can also copyright your script through the U.S. Copyright Office at https://eco.copyright.gov

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